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follow the yellow brick road
follow the yellow brick road
follow follow follow follow the yellow brick road
where does it take you?

EDIT: thanks to my favorite critiquer iMontero, changes have been made :^].

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:iconimontero:
This is well done and i love the idea, a few hotspots disturb the harmony of the picture though.

Bright white areas in a photo attract attention, like the tile on the right. others like the car, the patches of grass, the tiles on the left wall disturb when i'm trying to follow the yellow bricks on the sidewalk. My manager is very strict bout these in photos, so when i learned from him

On a very good point, you used the "leading edge" concept in the photo very well.

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Art is the expression of Imagination, not the reproduction of reality.
~Sculptor Henry Moore~
:iconrunningdevil:
Oh jeez, I see what you mean. That white tile is just screaming at me, I can't believe I didn't notice it the first time! Time for some cropping+clone-stamping. Thanks very much for the feedback, it is always appreciated.

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In all love there is some madness, yet in all madness there is some method.
:iconimontero:
Glad to be of help.

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Art is the expression of Imagination, not the reproduction of reality.
~Sculptor Henry Moore~
:iconpincushion-jester:
I love what you've done with this, it's very eye-catching. P:

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'Oh,' cried Lizzie, 'Laura, Laura.
You should not peep at goblin men.'-Goblin Market by Christina Rosseti
:iconxxacgxx:
Wow, this is so cool, It's very eye catching :)

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:iconwalkingxxspazztic:
I love the concept, and the "spot coloring", it worked well for this. I almost wish that the yellow was brighter, though.

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and less like it's math
if you pull on my hair
and bite me like that."
:iconrunningdevil:
Thank you :^]

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In all love there is some madness, yet in all madness there is some method.
:iconyukihira:
I like the composition of the piece! And it's very creative, I love the contrast of the yellow from the B&W! Excellent job!
:iconstranger-than-me:
great use of color and marvelous concept , great work!

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“I'm as happy as any director who's tormented by everything they had to change,”


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September 5, 2008
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Sep 4, 2007, 12:47:03 AM

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